Sunday 21 March 2010

Script's


Script 1st draft:

The Script
“EROTOMANIA” by Lisa Mulhern, Georgia Middleton, Scott Woodsell & Angel Pearte.
FIRST SCENE
Scene opens in an empty dark park. A shady male silhouette can be seen under a streetlamp. The man can be seen facing a house, head tilted towards a room, his eyes transfixed on what he is watching.
His Heavy breathing.
A shot of a young, beautiful girl named Annabelle Richmond is shown in the window on the a phone.
Annabelle: (Into the phone) I can’t believe he did that! She deserves so much better then him.
Scene cuts back to the man outside, the camera follows down his body, until we reach his shoes. Blood drops fall by his feet.
END SCENE
SECOND SCENE
Scene opens in a party environment, teenagers drinking, laughing and having fun, listening to music. Two boys stand talking in the corner of the room. Their names are Daymon Stamford and Charlie Biel.
Charlie: (Over the music) Man, have you seen Annabelle tonight?
Daymon: (Seems Uninterested) Yeah.
Charlie: She is looking good, man. I’m gunna’ go talk to her.
Daymon: (Grabs Charlie’s wrist forcefully) Why? I mean she wouldn’t go for you… you wouldn’t have a chance…
Charlie: (Rubbing Wrist) Relax, man, come on.
Daymon follows reluctantly behind Charlie until they reach Annabelle. Charlie taps her shoulder and she turns around, smiling.
Annabelle: Hey Charlie! Who’s your friend?
Daymon raises his eyes to her; a big, fake smile comes onto his face.
Charlie: This is Daymon, he goes to our school.
Daymon: (Raising his hand to hers) It’s nice to meet-
Annabelle sequels as her friends drag her away, laughing. Daymon let’s his hand fall back down as he glares at the back of her head as she walks off. The music gets louder as Daymon watches her. She gets into a group picture with her friends, another friend taking a picture. As the flash goes off, the screen goes white, fading out into photographs on a wall. They are all different pictures of Annabelle. The audience barely see the pictures through the shady light, and it is obvious the pictures are of those of some kind of stalker. Red circles outline her features; other people are cut out of photos and pictures that are secretly taken. After the camera pans across the wall, it zooms out, and yet again the dark silhouette is shown, in a dirty, dusty, messy §

Script 2nd draft:
E R OT O M A N I A
By Lisa Mulhern, Georgia Middleton, Scott Woodsell & Angel Peart.
SCENE ONE
Scene starts with a panning shot of photographs spread out on a wall. Camera zooms into a picture of Annabelle Richmond, at a party. White ‘camera flash’ flashes across the screen, and fades into the party scene. People are dancing, drinking and having fun. David Chamber is suspect no1, Annabelle’s best friend. Over the loud music we can see them arguing.
Annabelle: Just leave it David! It has nothing to do with you!
David: It doesn’t? Your so-called boyfriend is no good for you!
Annabelle starts to walk away.
(Grabbing wrist roughly) Don’t walk away when I’m talking to you!
Close up of wrist. Flashes back to the photographs on the wall. Once again zooms in to one picture. Scene sets in the bathroom of the party. Two girls stand in the bathroom, applying make up in the mirror. Their names are Leila Luton and Chelsea Taylor. Leila Luton is suspect number 2.
Chelsea: I don’t have a problem with her; I think she’s all right.
Leila: Are you joking?
Chelsea: No, seriously!
Leila: I hate Annabelle with a passion; she’s a total bitch.
Flash goes off again, shot of photographs on the wall, ‘I hate Annabelle with a passion’ echoes over the shot. Zooms into another picture and flashes into the party scene. A boy and a girl are seen kissing amongst the dancing people. The boy is Daymon Stamford, suspect number 3. Shot of couple kissing, zoomed in shot of close up of Daymon’s eyes, looking over at Annabelle rather then paying attention to the girl he is kissing. Annabelle is seen dancing with her friends, whilst Daymon holds an intense gaze on her. They pull apart to hug, and he is still looking at her. It then flashes back to pictures on the wall. A long shot of the pictures on the wall. As the camera starts to zoom out, flashbacks of Annabelle laughing, her kissing, he smiling, all start to flash up quickly. Once they are finished, with the creepy music in the background, we see a tall, male silhouette step into the shot.

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